User:Thoran7/Dysidea etheria/Longmv Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Thoran7


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:Thoran7/Dysidea etheria


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)

Evaluate the drafted changes
I like the format you've laid out and the topics you plan to address. It looks like you have a lot of awesome resources; but the format of two of your citations (3 and 5) seem to have a problem with the date. I think you could also add some in-text citations in the "Defenses" and "Habitat and Distribution" sections. Otherwise, your article is well-written so far, with third-person facts and no opinionated or biased language. All of the information presented is directly relevant to the species you've chosen.