User:Thought22Potato/Central America Volcanic Arc/Semunm17 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

thought22potato


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Thought22Potato/Central_America_Volcanic_Arc?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Central America Volcanic Arc

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

Lead
The citation at the end of this needs to be altered, (garcia:Rose).

Great information, but your last sentence ends a bit abruptly. Maybe add its peak height into the sentence.

Should include synopsis of whats included in the major sections of this paper.

Good job on concise lead.

Article Body
Your citations need to be altered in here as well (I see you added that to your references, but I still need to mark it).

"The cocos plate-active margins" sentence seems really long, could it potentially be two sentences?

Your final sentence of the first paragraph should have the citation at the end not in the middle.

You use a lot of the same citations, it might be useful to vary some citations so not all your information come from the same place (unless its an encyclopedia of volcanism).

"data from macmillan" this doesnt seem like it needs to be added perhaps data (cite).

"thought to be" maybe change to "understood to be"

Organization
In terms of organization, I think you could split up your information into "tectonic history," "geography," "geology and orogeny," "minerals and resources," (if the area is known for some specific resource), "culture" etc.

Maybe add some more photos?

Overall Idea
Overall, you've got a great article started here! The information is presented well and just needs some polishing.