User:Thunderbear65/Developmental plasticity/Maragon13 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Thunderbear65


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:Thunderbear65/Developmental plasticity


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Developmental plasticity

Evaluate the drafted changes
For you first sentence you may want to start with another word such as In or In reference. It may be a more understandable introduction. Other than that I think it is a great first sentence. I would also just make sure that you keep including more references as you have been doing.