User:Thunderbear65/Developmental plasticity/Thunderbear65 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

https://dashboard.wikiedu.org/users/Ryanbrown58 I read the article so far it has an excellent lead, but it could use some more content included in the article. I think it could use a more balanced approach, because the article is so short it’s barely objective in terms of length, but it could use some visual imagery to illustrate the topic. New content wouldn’t hurt either, however neutrality is important in articles like this, and there are new sources in this topic even today. I think it could be helpful with my group’s topic of discussion.


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * Developmental plasticity


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)

Evaluate the drafted changes
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