User:Thunderclaw2/Corynebacterium xerosis/AlexKurtt Peer Review

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 * Link to draft you're reviewing:User:Thunderclaw2/Corynebacterium xerosis
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists):Corynebacterium xerosis

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I really like all of the intext links that you have provided. Adding one to Bacillus subtilis would be another good one to add. One other small change I would make is removing "Also," from the beginning of the second paragraph of Characteristics. In general, the flow of the article is great and the additions have been great! I like the 3 sections you've made as they are all unique and important subjects. The addition of a picture would be a great final touch!