User:ThunderhillMc/Déjà vu/CHawks17 Peer Review

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I liked the concept of this article a lot. I feel that Deja Vu is a very elusive thing to speak about because it is one of those anecdotal experiences where one truly has to just "live" through it for themselves. With that being said, I would have liked to see a little more information in the beginning regarding the topic as a whole. The 3rd paragraph did a great job at it once I began reading to that point, but maybe just a tad more in the first 2 paragraphs would really set up the reader with some interesting information to add into a very great article overall! I liked how the information was laid out and I think that it was a very good article overall!