User:TiaIvy/On a French River/Quaquaversalll Peer Review

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What you have so far is great. You explain Impressionism very concisely, without going into too much detail, which is excellent. The only part I got stuck on was when you say the composition is often "open". I'm unsure what you mean by this, and it could aid from some elaboration, especially if it's an Impressionist characteristic you'll reference again later.

The introduction with the details of the artwork is also great; you phrased things rather well.

At the moment, there's not much to review (which makes sense, we're in the middle of the assignment). I think you're headed in a good direction. Try and implement more sources if possible in your following updates. I noted several hyperlinks to other wikipedia pages, which is great for the background section, but some other sources would really help once you get deeper into writing.

Hi,

Thank you so much for providing me with a peer review. I appreciate your feedback regarding the use of the word "open." I agree with you; it is indeed an ambiguous word. I have since made the necessary changes. Additionally, I have incorporated more sources, cited them appropriately, and added more images to further enhance my page. Please let me know your thoughts on the updated article! Thank you very much.