User:TiaIvy/The Corning Ewer/Nta317 Peer Review

General info
TiaIvy
 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing:User:TiaIvy/The Corning Ewer
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists):User:TiaIvy/The Corning Ewer

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

Consider adding more background information, and complete citation

Could provide more information about materials and what it represented