User:TiaIvy/The Corning Ewer/Sioch Peer Review

General info
Tiaivy
 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing:https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:TiaIvy/The_Corning_Ewer?veaction=edit&preload=Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists):

Evaluate the drafted changes

 * 1) the article so far does a good job of giving concise and relevant information on the object. The addition of a parallels section was a good choice so that future viewers can place the object in context.
 * 2) Some slight grammatical errors and maybe the author could elaborate more on what the Roman Tradition is in the Manufacture section? Currently it's a little difficult to tell what the Roman tradition is and how its relevant.
 * 3) Continue to add information to the sections (especially the significance section), maybe add a section relating to the history of the ewer as in who owned it at what times if that information is available?
 * 4) The description section for the object and the manufacture section are very clever ways to give information on the object itself