User:Tiazjane/4B (movement)/Maisygreen Peer Review

General info
Tiazjane
 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing:User:Tiazjane/4B (movement)
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists):4B (movement)

Evaluate the drafted changes
I think this page is really well put together, and does a really great job of expanding on the already existing one. I only have a few specific things to note. Very minor but the beginning of the "Digital Movement" section needs capitalization. In that same section, the quote isn't attributed to anyone so using "she" is confusing. Lastly, I think calling the fertility rate "alarming" in the last section would classify as writing with opinion/tone, so maybe just cut that word out?

Other than that, this page was really impressive, and I think you all did a great job. Super interesting read!