User:Tiff592/Nanoelectrochemistry/Elainewongso Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Tiff592


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Tiff592/Nanoelectrochemistry?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Nanoelectrochemistry

Evaluate the drafted changes
The drafted changes were overall very good. The information added was concise but detailed with sufficient citations added. The figure included was also well captioned and makes it clearer. However, the first paragraph was written in first person point of view which should not be done for wikipedia and there are some grammatical errors.