User:Tiffany Ong/Choose an Article

Article Selection
Please list articles that you're considering for your Wikipedia assignment below. Begin to critique these articles and find relevant sources.

Option 1

 * Article title
 * Self-driving Car


 * Article Evaluation
 * This article already has many information embedded to it. Unlike its detailed and long body, the article has a very concise lead which could probably be integrated to have more general background on thee topic. The structure of the article is very organized and it has a great flow. The sources used in the articles are up-to-date and it scopes many information as the sources are taken from year 2000 until year 2020. One strength this article has is its good and sufficient use of media. There are already very little space for improvements.


 * Sources
 * Self-driving car
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Option 2

 * Article title
 * Automated Driving System


 * Article Evaluation
 * The "Automated Driving System" article opens with a good general idea of the topic. There are many good information found in the article, but the article can be improved as there are many other information that correlates with this topic. It is structured well, but it still has many rooms for improvements. Sources used for this article is up-to-date. One improvement that should be made is to also include the failure or problems faced Automated Driving System has encountered rather than having only the success part in the article.


 * Sources
 * Automated driving system
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 * Czarnecki, Krzysztof. "Operational world model ontology for automated driving systems–part 2: Road users, animals, other obstacles, and environmental conditions,”." Waterloo Intelligent Systems Engineering Lab (WISE) Report, University of Waterloo (2018).

Option 3

 * Article title
 * Advanced drive-assistance system


 * Article Evaluation
 * "Advanced drive-assistance system" article have a good and long enough lead. However, it could be made more concise. Unlike its long lead, the body of the article is not as long which also implies how it can use improvements and updates on the information used for the article. The structure of the article is acceptable, but it could use more subtopics that can better assist the readers of Wikipedia.


 * Sources
 * Advanced driver-assistance systems
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