User:Tiffanynacario22/Feminism in Japan/Oceana428 Peer Review

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Tiffanynacario22


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * Feminism in Japan


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Feminism in Japan

Evaluate the drafted changes
This article looks very well developed in many aspects, especially in regards to the history of feminism in Japan. I would recommend researching more about the modern feminism in Japan since there isn't much information about the 2000s or 2010s. Under the heading 'later feminism', I suggest additions such as the Me Too movement which was global at the time the movement was surging in popularity though I am unsure how much influence that specific movement had on Japan. The headings of 'manga' and 'anime' could be added to as well to give readers an in-depth look into how women are defining those kinds of media that are typically used to sexualize the female gender. Reproductive rights is another topic that has been in the news around the world which could be spoken about under the heading of 'later feminism' as a short example then dive further in under its own heading. Other than additions under those topics, the article is very concise and developed. You have done a great job!