User:Tiffanyrodi/Anorexia nervosa/Arleenicolee Peer Review

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 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Tiffanyrodi


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 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Anorexia nervosa

Evaluate the drafted changes
I believe you did a good job on this article. I like how all of your sources are recent and up to date. Anorexia nervosa is a serious problem that I believe needs to be discussed more openly. Everything that you have discussed is very well-written and easy to understand. In the "Behavioral symptoms" section, you could have added that people who struggle with anorexia actually have a fear of gaining weight. I know it already states things about wanting to lose weight or stay a certain weight, but some people actually have a fear of gaining weight, it is known as Obesophobia. Under the section "Relapse", you could talk about how likely the occurrence is to happen. It is more likely to happen if the person has been living with the disorder for a long period of time. Again, I do believe you did a good job with what information you provided. Good luck!