User:Tiffanyrodi/Anorexia nervosa/Ashleyphill Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Tiffanyrodi


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:Tiffanyrodi/Anorexia nervosa
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Anorexia nervosa

Evaluate the drafted changes
It doesn't look like the lead has been updated; however, I don't think it needs to be for this edit. The lead on the existing article seems sufficient and concise. I love the content addition of anorexia across the lifespan - I personally would find it interesting as a part of the article, and it fits in nicely with the other content. Great job keeping it very neutral! There does seem to be a problem with one of the citations in red, so you may want to take a look at that.