User:Tiffanyrodi/Anorexia nervosa/Dauryn Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?Tiffanyrodi


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * Editing User:Tiffanyrodi/Anorexia nervosa - Wikipedia


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Anorexia nervosa - Wikipedia

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

I really enjoyed how information the edits made to the article are. I specifically like how cohesive the article is and how everything flowed perfectly together. I was not confused in any part about the information that was being mentioned. The only small edit/revision I would make is to provide a better introductory sentence. The original article is not specificaly aimed towards geriatric AN so it would be good to provide some transitional vocabulary that transitions from general AN to more of a Geriatric AN. I also noticed a few instances in your draft that could provide more context/detail. For example, the last sentence on the first paragraph mention that "adolescents has a more limitation", it would be good to add what those limitations are so it could provide more context on how Geriratric AN is different. I really like how you provided a definition to Early Onset and Late onset of the disease. Other than that, I think this is a really good article edit draft!