User:Tiffanyrodi/Anorexia nervosa/Eyannaib Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Tiffanyrodi


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:Tiffanyrodi/Anorexia nervosa
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)

Evaluate the drafted changes
Great article! I do not see how the first paragraph ties in with the Article Draft. I suggest labeling it and even changing the font/font size to fit the font used for the other portion of this article so things can flow better. You had a good amount of sources. You could have placed the sources at the very end of the paragraph if you only used one source for all the sentences in the paragraph. I think anorexia can be expressed through pictures so I think adding a picture of anorexics in the sports that were talked about could be a nice addition. The 3rd paragraph in 'Anorexia of Aging' seems a little biased about why elderly experience anorexia. Other than that everything else looks very neutral.