User:Tiffanyrodi/Anorexia nervosa/Hhavenh Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Tiffanyrodi


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Tiffanyrodi/Anorexia_nervosa?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Anorexia nervosa
 * Anorexia nervosa

Evaluate the drafted changes
The lead was a great introduction to the topic "anorexia of aging." It let the reader know exactly what the paragraph was about and what to expect. The drafted changes go well with the article. It is the same subject, just a different side of the subject. From what I see, the current article doesn't mention anorexia of aging so this was a great, informative contribution. The drafted changes were easy to read. They stated what the subject was, the details of it, and the signs and symptoms. The drafted changes are completely neutral. The content simply focuses on delivering information. The drafted changes positively contribute to the article. This bit of information goes well with the article and is much needed to approve the articles overall quality.