User:Tiffanyrodi/Anorexia nervosa/Samarahzeinou Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Tiffanyrodi/Anorexia nervosa


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Tiffanyrodi/Anorexia_nervosa?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Anorexia nervosa

Evaluate the drafted changes
I think you did an incredible job with the content and references you have provided. Your article edits flowed well and were easy to follow along with & read. You were also able to get the information across successfully using a neutral tone. I was uninformed about the prevalence in anorexia nervosa and laxative use in the elderly population. I would look over the capitalization of some of the words you used and look back at your citations. I can't wait to see how far you progress with your article edits, this is one I am definitely going to have to come back and read!