User:Tiffanyrodi/Anorexia nervosa/Savannaj13 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

tiffanyrodi


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Tiffanyrodi/Anorexia_nervosa?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)

Evaluate the drafted changes
This is a great article so far. The author has added their own concise, factual information. There are a few citation issues to address, but overall very good sources. The content is neutral and lays information about the disorder. Breaking the article into sections will be beneficial to keep everything organized. A few capitalization errors could be fixed during proofreading. Adding images and media will make this article very visually appealing. It is very balanced and provides a lot of useful information. I look forward to seeing how it comes together.