User:Tiffanyrodi/Anorexia nervosa/TRAWEESU Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Tiffanyrodi


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * Anorexia nervosa


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists).
 * Tiffanyrodi/Anorexia nervosa

Evaluate the drafted changes
You're off to a great start with your work on your article. I learned things I certainly didn't know, and the information about wrestlers was enlightening. I was not aware of some of the information and thought I knew a good bit about anorexia nervosa. That was impressive and interesting. I did notice the shift from anorexia nervosa in the athletes to the aging was pretty quick. Take caution about not having more weight on one area of the topic than the other. Also, I noted the past and then present tense in one sentence near the beginning. Looks like you have more sources at this point for anorexia in the elderly. I believe it would be helpful to give more background information about what anorexia nervosa is also some general knowledge about it as well, then flow into those categories. I know you are just getting started and I'm sure it will turn out terrific. ~