User:Tiffanyrodi/Anorexia nervosa/Twalton1996 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Tiffanyrodi


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * Editing User:Tiffanyrodi/Anorexia nervosa - Wikipedia


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Anorexia nervosa - Wikipedia

Evaluate the drafted changes
Hi Tiffany. So far it looks like you have a great idea of how you are planning to improve your wiki article. Have you decided where you were going to insert this new information? I enjoyed reading it. I believe that the information that you are planning on adding in the article is very informative and it is something that the world should be aware of. When I think of anorexia nervosa, I automatically think of young adults. Making other aware of the disease in older people is crucial. The information is clear and precise. When inserting this information to the article, be sure to add it in the right place so that the article will flow together. Another suggestion I have is maybe adding another subtitle involving young adults that deal with anorexia nervosa. You did a great job at adding references. I believe that the information that you are adding will improve quality of the article. I also would like to recommend you checking out the subtitle "Complications". There are several parts that needs medical citation. Overall, I believe you are off to a great start and I am ready to see your final results.