User:Tiffanywiffany/Dames Making Games/StevenTNG Peer Review

Hi Tiffany

I just finished reading your article draft. You did an amazing job on this article, and you also found so many information to put in the article. Seriously, amazing work you did there.

Overall I don't think there any criticism or mistake that need to fixed. You got everything down from the format to the sources. Great work!

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