User:Tikey105!/Mean world syndrome/Celestialspring Peer Review

General info
Tikey105!
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 * Link to draft you're reviewing:User:Tikey105!/Mean world syndrome
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists):Mean world syndrome

Evaluate the drafted changes
The added parts to the main mean world syndrome section are good. I like how you added the part about the early research of it and the importance of social media. If you have a source that tells or shows that social media platforms are increasingly becoming a major role in mean world syndrome though, it would be good to cite it. When it comes to the changes made to the first sentence in the COVID-19 section, I think a mix of the original sentence and yours would be better. Something like, "Beginning in 2019, the COVID-19 pandemic spread across the world which led individuals to spend more time inside and on social media, causing them to consume countless different forms of media content." I feel like your version of this sentence was a bit of a eyesore to read because of the usage of commas but I felt like the original sentence was not the best either. The "doomscrolling" section that you added is well done but try to get rid of filler words like "yet another." Other than that, your sources are good and your sections are well written.