User:Tikomkheidze/Black maternal mortality in the United States/Jmb517 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Tikomkheidze


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:Tikomkheidze/Black maternal mortality in the United States


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)

Evaluate the drafted changes
These edits look great! The introduction is much more straightforward and provides a great overview for the rest of the article.

You may want to consider rewording the first sentence of the third paragraph - what does that mean and how can that be supported?

You also may want to change American Indian to Indigenous women.

I really like the split between Medical and Institutional prevention measures. You may want to consider rewording the first sentence of the last paragraph and/or supporting this with a citation.