User:TimBlurr/Choose an Article

Option 1:
Article Title:

John Muir

Article Evaluation:

Though most of the information is up to date and accurate, there is lacking information when it comes to the relationship between John Muir and President Roosevelt and Muir's desires for environmental protection.

Sources:

Letters from John Muir to [Theodore Roosevelt 1907, Sept. 9th ]

Option 2:
Article Title:

Team Fortress 2

Article Evaluation:

The article appears to have no bias, however when it comes to providing information on subjects outside of the base gameplay, there is lacking information. Because of lore based comic books, we learn information about characters and game modes and why they exist.

The change I would make would be to the Mann Versus Machine mode, as it briefly discusses the character Gray Mann, who is not discussed in the game mode information, but the "plot" of the mode follows the events of the comic.

Source:

Team Fortress 2: Blood Brothers Comic

Option 3:
Article Title:

jerma985

Article Evaluation:

The article is up to date on information, but lacks structure and some information about events that were consistently documented, like that of the Dollhouse Stream and the Jerma Baseball Stream.

Jerma Doll House day 1