User:Tim Baltmore/Elizabeth and Mary Kirby/K8shep Peer Review

General info


 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Tim Baltimore


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:Tim Baltmore/sandbox


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Elizabeth and Mary Kirby

Evaluate the drafted changes
You're making some important additions here, as concerns more detail about their lives and what they thought about it. Adding personal details about their interests and their own words is really important. I love that you added the context of other women who were doing similar work.

Questions I have:


 * 1) where are your citations for this work? Putting them in now, in the draft, will make it so much easier when you move to the main space.
 * 2) Do you know why the sisters are always talked about together? They even have their joint wiki page. I wonder if anyone has said anything about that.

Peer Review Response
Thank you for reviewing my work! I may have put my work in an incorrect / confusing place so I appreciate you taking the time to work with me. Here's how I plan to move forward with the draft:


 * 1) I will add citations within the Wikipedia format. I am currently working from a Google Doc because I find that interface a lot easier to use and I have citation comments in there, but I will transfer those over to make sure everything works.
 * 2) I will look into why the sisters don't really have their own individual presences in History / any of the sources we see them referred to in.
 * 3) So far, I have just been adding tidbits of supporting information into the existing structure of the article. Going forward, I may consider adding a standalone chunk of information or restructuring the article to make it more cohesive and balance the added information.
 * 4) I will use the last of the additional sources I found once the library fills my request. I'll share these sources with Gideon as well so that we don't miss any information that would be good to include.
 * 5) I will work more collaboratively with Gideon as we move forward. Communication is important when you are co-editing.