User:Timbenuka/Etymology/A1eji Peer Review

General info
Timbenuka
 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing:User:Timbenuka/Etymology
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists):Etymology

Evaluate the drafted changes
I thought the draft was very informative. It taught me a new word/concept that I have not learned about. The paragraph is relevant and concise, however, my only suggestion is to improve the punctuation and fix a few words so that it is easier to read and the sentences flow better. Also, I would suggest to add the citations after a sentence just in case the reader wants to be taken to the reference.