User:Timbenuka/Etymology/Johann Estrada Peer Review

General info
Timbenuka
 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing:User:Timbenuka/Etymology
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists):Etymology

Evaluate the drafted changes
After reviewing the sandbox, I think that Timbenuka did a good job. There are some changes I would make, like showing what information you pulled from your sources. Right now, you seem to have just cited your sources, but don't really make a clear indication what information you pulled from those sources. As an example, when you look at the sources/notes of other Wikipedia pages, the parts that need extra information from outside sources are either blue (indicating a hyperlink) or they have a number. If you click that number, it shows you where they got the information from. I think having something like that could really benefit you. Other than that, I don't see any other major issues, so good job