User:Timmy Thyme/Inwood Hill Park/Ahhinckson Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

I am reviewing Timmy Thyme, Kith98 and Ecology (Species )/Inwood Hill Park


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=User:Timmy_Thyme/Inwood_Hill_Park&action=edit


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Inwood Hill Park

Evaluate the drafted changes
'''Lead- I like how you started off your lead. Your lead reflects the topics that you are discussing, which also relates to your topic of "Species Diversity". It is concise and straight to the point.'''

'''Content- Your content added is relevant to the topic. You have discussed the different species that live in Inwood Hill Park. Your content is neutral and doesn't include any bias. I like how the content presented so far flows together. I like how you discussed how the economic impact of the park in the late 1900s. I know the topic isn't quite finished, so I would suggest that after you state, "It is fortunate that the Protected Native Plants Program was created in 1989 and that other regulations have been adopted since then." , you include brief knowledge of what other regulations have been adopted, if you haven't already thought of that. Also, before going into the different categories, you could include how the park was economically impacted today, with the issue of cutting funding. Overall, so far, I like the structure of your article.'''

'''Sources and References- All of your sources are current. Make sure as you are writing, you are actively citing, so you don't have to come back at the end, to make it easier. Your ideas reflect the sources and I can tell that you have an understanding of what you have read.'''

'''Images/ Media- Currently, you have no photos up. However, it would be really nice if you added images of the different species you've mentioned as well as what the park looked like in the 1970s versus now.'''