User:TimothyWuUCR/George Longfish/Amiratotah Peer Review

I find the organization of your article to be done really well. Your descriptions for the artworks you provided are very detailed as well. One main concern I have or your article is that you have references at the bottom but you have no links dispersed throughout the article. I remember our professor saying how articles will get removed without links in the writing itself. For your "lead" I think it's good that you put what forms of art he uses and introduced where he was from as well. However, your first sentence and second sentence could possibly be combined, otherwise, it just feels choppy and repetitive. I think your "lead" does contain the most important information about your artist and his art style alone. It's also a good lead way into the rest of your article.

The missing references throughout the article are your greatest issue, and with that, I would just say to make sure that you aren't using too much information from one article to create a balance in your article. I would also say it looks like you used many references so I would just say make sure you checked all possible articles on your artist because the more detail the better.