User:Tingserg/Choose an Article

Article Selection
Please list articles that you're considering for your Wikipedia assignment below. Begin to critique these articles and find relevant sources.

Option 1

 * Article title
 * Women's Environment & Development Organization


 * Article Evaluation
 * The article is extremely barren, and there was not much use of citations from various sources. The article is written neutrally, however, and as this is a feminist group, the equity gap is tackled here. Although this article is extremely relevant to the UN's Sustainable Development goals, I don't think there's enough free information on the subject for me to both read three journals while ensuring others on Wikipedia won't hit a paywall trying to look at my sources.


 * Sources

Option 2

 * Article title
 * Sustainable industries


 * Article Evaluation
 * The article is written with a neutral tone, but the present information can be greatly expanded upon. There is no talk of any industries that are sustainable, or attempting to move towards sustainability, and thus I think it provides an incomplete picture of the topic. Each claim has a citation, and the grammar and spelling is all in order, which I would continue in my additional edits.


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Option 3

 * Article title
 * Global Food Security Index


 * Article Evaluation
 * The article is comprised only of a list of criteria the Global Food Security Index uses to rank countries. It does not elaborate at all on these standards, nor mention which countries fall where, and what regions of the world are more prone to low scores. There's no grammatical or spelling errors, as that'd be quite difficult to do considering how little is written.


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Option 4

 * Article title
 * Life-cycle Engineering


 * Article Evaluation
 * The article has more information than the first three I have looked at, but according to the talk page, some of the information is misleading and should be corrected in order to provide the best information and an overall more accurate picture. There are only ten sources, and despite being a topic that would impact the whole world, there does not seem to be any articles that would help close the equity gap.


 * Sources

Option 5

 * Article title
 * Feminist Security Studies


 * Article Evaluation
 * This article is arguably the most complete out of the ones I have evaluated. The grammar and spelling all seems to be in order, and the article itself is very structured. Once more, as this topic details feminism, it tackles the equity gap, especially since it details looking at works of literature through a feminist lens.


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