User:Tink0510/Black crested gibbon/Marissabasi Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Tink0510


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Tink0510/Black_crested_gibbon?veaction=edit&preload=Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Tink0510/Black_crested_gibbon?veaction=edit&preload=Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template

Evaluate the drafted changes
This article does a good job at explaining the critically endangered label of the balck crested gibbon on the IUCN Red List. It is interesting how similar species are not facing the same hardships as the gibbon. The only suggestion I would make is to add a "Lead" to your aticle that can sum up the changes you made. This makes it easier to see what you have added to the article and new knowledge people have aquired.