User:Tinosherwood/Hispanic Americans in World War II/Aalarus Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

https://dashboard.wikiedu.org/users/Tinosherwood


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Tinosherwood/Hispanic_Americans_in_World_War_II?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Hispanic Americans in World War II

Evaluate the drafted changes
I do not see any information added to the lead of the article. However, I have also not added any information to my article's lead section. I am assuming adding or changing the lead would be an edit exercise if you were creating a new article. It is clear to me that this is only an edit of a particular section.

The content is clearly relevant to the topic. I do not see your sources listed on the bibliography page, therefore I do not know if the content added is up to date. I would suggest going to your bibliography tab and adding your sources. I did see a link in your content but in order for me to access it I would have to copy and paste, which I did. I found pages of Google results. If you end a sentence and want to add your link, you can clink "link" in your tool bar, a box shows up where you can paste your sources link. It will then insert a blue colored hyperlink. This allows the reader to go to that source in a new window. Outside of that, your content fits well and I think it represents a gap of importance in history. It definitely serves to represent underrepresented groups on Wikipedia. In comparison to the whole original article, I don't feel like your content is overly persuasive. I think your editing strengthens some of the missing importance to create that balance this article needs. I know images are difficult to add to articles, so I was not looking for those things.

Your content is well written. I find it clear and concise. Overall your material is well written and makes sense with the original article. I think the most important thing to go back and do is add your sources.