User:Tinseldeaconpo/Alison Loader/Kat von B Peer Review

General info

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Evaluate the drafted changes
It was very clear and concise. I would double check that you italicized titles and made sure to link locations (for example, Montréal) and concepts (for example, animation and CGI) to their related existing Wikipedia pages. Everything else looked great. Good use of sources!