User:Tjade21/University of Chile Student Federation/Trevor008 Peer Review

General info
Tjade21
 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing:Editing User:Tjade21/University of Chile Student Federation - Wikipedia
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists):University of Chile Student Federation - Wikipedia

Evaluate the drafted changes
How the federation defines itself is troubling, considering the source does not exist anymore. I would encourage really trying to dig through the internet to find something where the federation defines itself, maybe an advertisement?

Great job on expanding the history, with some of the sources being the same, you could omit some of the citations and just cite after the statement is done.

The history being expanded gives better weight to the article itself. I appreciate the inclusion of modern history including the 2000s because it gives weight to its relevance today.

One nitpicky critique, in the fourth paragraph under history you quote that the new generation of students were often referred to as the "fearless generation", I think it would be important to include who refers to them as that. Without a clear reference, it may sound a bit biased.

Overall, really appreciate the expansion of the history, it shows that the group is still relevant today, the old Wikipedia article makes it seem like a group lost in time.