User:Tjreevey/DeVon Bean/DoubleQuarterPounder123 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Tjreevey


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Tjreevey/DeVon_Bean?veaction=edit&preload=Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * DeVon Bean

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

This article is a great start to talk about the famous sprinter. It talks about his records and which of those records were able to get him to exceed to the next level and which couldn't. My only real critique is the formatting, which has the entire text in bold. This could likely make the heading and the main article blend in with each other due to how similar they look.