User:Tjreevey/DeVon Bean/Gabbissmart720 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Tjreevery


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Tjreevey/DeVon_Bean?veaction=edit&preload=Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Tjreevey/DeVon_Bean?veaction=edit&preload=Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template

Evaluate the drafted changes
So far, I like that there is slight information about DeVon Bean and what he does. I edited the "o" in Olympics to be capital. I think there should be early life about him such as:

How did he get good enough for the Olympics?

Why did he want to be a sprinter?

Overall just more about his personal life and why he is the person he was/is.