User:Tkeogh11/Renu C. Laskar/Hmwhite9 Peer Review

General info
Tkeogh11
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 * Link to draft you're reviewing:Renu C. Laskar
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists):Renu C. Laskar

Lead

 * The lead section was updated by Taylor's own research and effectively adds a personal aspect to Renu Laskar.
 * The lead concisely described Laskar's interests without going into too much detail.
 * This section doesn't include direct descriptions of the article's sections but the reader can easily identify what the article is going to cover.
 * The lead mentions her husband's obituary, which is not mentioned in the rest of the article, so it could be debated whether to include this point.
 * Overall, the lead section is comprehensive.

Content

 * The content added is very relevant to the topic as it goes into the influences Laskar experiences to pursue mathematics.
 * The content added is up-to-date, however Laskar's reflection of her career at Clemson University could be provided a date so as to keep the information timely.
 * All of the content seems necessary to the flow of the article.
 * The article indirectly addresses topics related to historically underrepresented topics by highlighting a woman in science, specifically an Indian-American.

Tone and Balance

 * The content has a neutral, unbiased tone throughout.
 * No claims appear to be biased toward a particular position or try to persuade the reader in any way.
 * Both her personal and professional life are described, so no points are represented significantly more than others.

Sources and References

 * All of the content is backed up by reliable sources of information.
 * The information added does reflect what is written in the articles.
 * The sources are thorough and current, with the most recent sources being from 2023.
 * The sources include both news articles and journal articles, so they represent a variety of authors.
 * The links are functioning.

Organization

 * The content added is well-written and easy to follow.
 * There are no apparent grammatical errors.
 * The information is overall well organized but could have more subsections within the headings so as to make it easier to find details.

Images and Media

 * The article does include an image with a caption.
 * The image is placed in Laskar's overview box, which seems like an appropriate place.

Overall Impressions

 * This is a quality article of information on Laskar's family and career.
 * It could be improved with more specific organization and focusing solely on Laskar rather than going into too much detail on her husband.