User:Tkeogh11/Renu C. Laskar/Stoneelizabeth Peer Review

General info
Tkeogh11
 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Renu_C._Laskar&oldid=1187263631
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Renu C. Laskar

Evaluate the drafted changes
The lead is a good summary of the subject and provides a good introduction. Overall the grammar and spelling are good. The one error that I saw was in the second sentence of the "Early life and education" : "to the women that time". I think that this could be solved by adding "at". The information was divided into logical sections. The last two paragraphs in the "Early life and education" section are repetitive. The tone is mostly neutral, but the second paragraph in the "Academic life" section seems biased -- it praises the subject more than a neutral tone should.