User:Tkeogh11/Renu C. Laskar/Tylersander11 Peer Review

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Tkeogh11
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 * Link to draft you're reviewing:Renu C. Laskar
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists):Renu C. Laskar

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Just upon opening the article it looks great. I love that you were able to find an image you were able to use, as I personally could not find any of the scientist for my article that fit Wikipedia's copyright restrictions. I'm also glad that you were able to work on a profile for a professor from Clemson. I think the lead does a great job of summarizing the content found in the rest of the article, including where she is from, what she does now, her contributions to her field, and the important parts of her career. The "Early Life and Education" section of the article is very well done, as the pages of many female scientists lack this information entirely. Telling the story of how Laskar got to where she is now is so important and you did a great job with that. The "Academic life" section is also well done, it does a good job of explaining the path of her career. One improvement I think could be made is making more of an emphasis on Laskar's contributions to her field. I think this could be done by describing more in detail the work that she conducted over the years. The organization of the article as a whole is well done. I think you did a great job!