User:Tkshimiz/Cupido Amyntula/Elizlilyd Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Timothy Katsuyuki Shimizu (Tkshimiz)


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Tkshimiz/Cupido_Amyntula?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * (article does not exist)

Evaluate the drafted changes
Lead:


 * The article lead is missing.
 * Consider adding a sentence that states the common and scientific names of the insect and its location.
 * Some of the introduction could be moved to create a lead section.

Content:


 * A habitat section has been added, which is relevant to the insect.
 * When stating the scientific name, capitalize the genus and do not capitalize the species (ex. Cupido amyntula).

Tone and Balance:


 * The tone is neutral and no opinions are stated.

Sources and References:


 * The sources are properly cited.
 * The sources seem credible, as they are from books or reviewed sources.
 * Consider linking your article to other Wikipedia articles (ex. Baja California, Sedum lanceolatum).

Organization:


 * The introduction and habitat sections have been created.
 * The diet mentioned in the introduction could be a separate section.
 * If you are able to get more information on the flowers it visits, that could also potentially be a subsection.

Images and Media:

New Article: Overall impression
 * No images and media are in the article (although I believe we are not allowed to add any images that we do not have ownership of).
 * The article passes the Notability requirements, as 5 sources are cited.
 * The article is missing a lead section.
 * Adding in an infobox that details the Kingdom, Phylum, Class, etc. of the insect could be helpful.
 * This is a good start to a new article. The sources are cited properly and are relevant to the species. The writing is neutral. Because this is a new article, it may be helpful to view some existing articles and add in organizational bits (headings, infobox) to make the article more polished.