User:Tktrav/Identification in rhetoric

I could easily keep working on this, but I think I have added to and improved this page enough for now. I'd like to turn my attention to the final article. Aside from the sentence in Application about Lyon, which I added to the live page, everything is just in the sandbox. Tktrav (talk) 18:54, 27 March 2022 (UTC)

Feedback from Dr. Vetter:

 * The lead section of the article should not be this long. I noticed that you omitted the section heading "history". That is a good change because that section title didn't really fit the content, but that second paragraph doesn't really belong in the lead section either. The lead is only supposed to introduce the topic and forecast the main contents/topics of the article: more here: Manual of Style/Lead section. Maybe we could rename that second section "Definition"
 * A few small issues related to style/phrasing I went ahead and fixed. The section header should only capitalize the first word (I went ahead and changes this as well)