User:Tlbegin/Red handfish/Charles Fitzgerald Peer Review

Overall, decent editing for the red handfish wikipedia page. You properly included a number of peer-reviewed references to back up your claims. Good job with the "Reproduction" section as it aligns with the ecology aspect of this assignment. My only suggestions would be to include more sentences or make add to a section somewhere (maybe a paragraph for conservation), just so you get enough down that you get good credit for this article.

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