User:Tlewis10020/Laser ablation synthesis in solution/C1kschmidt Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Tlewis10020


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Laser ablation synthesis in solution
 * Laser ablation synthesis in solution

Evaluate the drafted changes
I think the additional changes to this article have really improved its overall quality. The information added to each paragraph was useful without it being to overwhelming which made it easy to read. When discussing the pros and cons, I thought the tone was neutral which is great. I also think the additional sources were appropriate. I noticed there aren't any section headings, which I think works for this article since the topic seems quite narrow. Overall, I think this was a good improvement on the original article.