User:Tlrittenhouse/Dyadic Power Theory/Malamushu Peer Review

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I left some notes on the wiki's talk page concerning the references, but wanted to provide further input. The content for this page is great and it is noticeble that the creator's conducted thorough research. However, the inconsistency of the sizes from each paragraph, heading, etc. pulls away from the content in the article. I would try re-spacing these paragraph and possibly turning the longer paragraphs like "Methodical Challenges to testing Dyadic Power Theory" into 2 or 3 paragraphs to better fit the style of the page. I would also like to see the introductory paragraph extended more to possibly include historic research/breakthroughs in this field, when the theories were written, etc.