User:Tltuggle18/Crowd psychology/Sld99 Peer Review

General info
tltuggle18
 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing:User:Tltuggle18/Crowd psychology
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists):Crowd psychology

Evaluate the drafted changes
So far I can’t really see what you’ve personally added to the article to make it better so make sure you’re underlining everything that comes from your personal research. It’s great that you’re adding in article citations so that your work can be reviewed by others and I can see that you’ve striked through information that you believe is unneeded. It seems like you have a good understanding on how this assignment needs to be done and just have a bit of work to finish ahead of you. I hope you get everything done in good time and am open to reviewing more of your work if needed.