User:Tmerom/Styrax japonicus/Izzy207 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Tmerom/Styrax japonicus


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Tmerom/Styrax_japonicus?preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)

Evaluate the drafted changes
Lead - the lead contains an introduction sentence that lets the reader know what the article is about. There are a lot of plant specifics in the lead that may fit better in other sections of the article. The information is informative and well referenced with good sources.

Taxonomy - concise, neutral information presented from good sources. The family information is presented in the lead, so a bit redundant.

Description/Distribution - These sections are divided nicely and organized for the reader. The images add to the information presented. Everything is cited appropriately. Some information is repeated from the lead.

Cultivation - neutral information cited appropriately

Medicinal properties and uses - very interesting section. One piece of information is missing a source and more information (the fragrance and leukaemic cell activity). Everything else seems relevant and cited well.

All in all, very well organized and informative article. The use of images is very well done. You include information on various elements of the plant which really completes the article. Good uses of neutral tone and good sources.