User:Tmgorze/Medieval technology/Ahanson11020 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Tmgorze


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Tmgorze/Medieval_technology?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Medieval technology
 * Medieval technology

Evaluate the drafted changes
I think this is a really well formulated and well-put together article; however, the style seems a little choppy, maybe try to smooth some things out? I also liked how everything was broken down into categories; that helped to make things easier to understand. Overall, great job!