User:Tmgorze/Medieval technology/Kj3gomez Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Tmgorze


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Tmgorze/Medieval_technology?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)

Evaluate the drafted changes
I did not notice any major grammatical errors, just a few misspellings. I think metal-working needs a dash in the first paragraph and witch needs to be changes to which under the blast furnace section. I think there could be more information about the context of the technology used in the 12th century, why were these changes important, who had access to materials, how did the advancements impact the rural economy and lead to growth of the commercial economy? Overall, I think a larger context of how lay people, farmers, and craftsmen were impacted by the technological advancements so the reader can understand the greater significance of these tools during the 12th century.